Peggy Powler & The Puddledown Incident.

[BIAD]

The baddy (the wolf) is a good one. I like how the environment develops as the story unfolds. 

Somehow it keeps reminding me of how the Predator was treated in the first movie. You heard stories about it. Saw what he was seeing now and then. Kind of like Jaws. You are nervous about it and you haven't even seen the shark yet.

Please don't take that the wrong way. I am terrible at describing stuff. I loved that aspect of those movies and I like it in your story too.

That's how I saw it developing in my head! Keep the monster off-stage for most of the story!