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A Stroll In The Sun [FBF2020]
#1
Here we go, I find myself walking down the street,
Thinking I might find myself something good to eat.

I ran across a friend of mine I was surprised  to meet
But can’t talk long, it’s 12 o’clock, I’ve got a crowd to beat!

I’m on a healthy diet now, no sugar and no meat
But today I felt I’ve been so good that I deserve a cheat!

I found my local cafe and went in to take a seat
Oh look a piece of apple pie! Yes, that would be a treat!

My tummy’s full, I need a nap, with all this Summer heat
A grand idea, heading home and thinking this is neat!

A vision! Peter Cottontail, some folks call him Pete
Chilling on my front lawn cooling off his fuzzy feet.

So I put a bullet in his head
'Cause I want rabbit meat.

The End


Thought I would put a cheerful entry into the contest first so my new neighborhood doesn't think that I am... slightly off.

tinyangry
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#2
@"Lumenari" 
Quote:So I put a bullet in his head

'Cause I want rabbit meat.

I Just love That part, don't forget the Carrots and White Potatoes with Baby Pees what A Great Stew.
Once A Rogue, Always A Rogue!
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(06-22-2020, 07:06 AM)guohua Wrote: @"Lumenari" 
Quote:So I put a bullet in his head

'Cause I want rabbit meat.

I Just love That part, don't forget the Carrots and White Potatoes with Baby Pees what A Great Stew.

Hey Beez!  Mate, you really need to read this!
#4
The competition has been ramped up a few notches !! WTG !
#5
Very, very nice. Cold, bold ending. Love it!
~ Today is the youngest you'll ever be again ~
#6
(07-07-2020, 12:43 AM)Sol Wrote: Very, very nice. Cold, bold ending. Love it!

It was as light-hearted as I am capable of...

Based off of my first trip into town for a few months.

Thank you for the compliment!

tinyinlove
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