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The Shooter [FBF 2020] - beez - 07-03-2020
Kevin slowed his breathing down, willed his pulse rate to slow as he looked through the gun site at his target 950 meters away. The rally was taking place in a park that was filled with people from all over the country. The candidate was due to speak for a few minutes, shake some hands, then go off to the next rally, three states away.
Kevin calmly waited.
When the target arrived on stage, Kevin slowly pulled the trigger and executed a perfect shot. While people were still screaming and security running all over, Kevin smoothly dismantled the rifle and put on his robe, put on the slippers that looked like fluffy bunnies and walked back downstairs from the attic.
He quietly reentered the ward and shuffled to the window, looking at the parade of police and emergency vehicles as they raced to the park that was over a half mile away.
Two nurses, looking over charts glanced at Kevin. One said, "What's his story?"
The other replied, "Oh, that's Kevin. He came in here a week ago catatonic, doesn't speak, just looks out the window every day. He's kind of sweet, just quiet."
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - guohua - 07-03-2020
@"beez"
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - beez - 07-03-2020
(07-03-2020, 08:41 PM)guohua Wrote: @"beez"
Thank you ma'am!
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - 727Sky - 07-03-2020
Short and to the point.. Well done
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - Captain Chaos - 07-03-2020
Good job!
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - beez - 07-03-2020
(07-03-2020, 10:47 PM)727Sky Wrote: Short and to the point.. Well done
Thank you! My shoulder is still gummed up so my typing is limited.
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - beez - 07-03-2020
(07-03-2020, 10:53 PM)Captain Chaos Wrote: Good job!
Thank you!
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - ChiefD - 07-04-2020
Great story! Unexpected twist there at the end.
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - beez - 07-04-2020
(07-04-2020, 02:03 AM)ChiefD Wrote: Great story! Unexpected twist there at the end.
Thank you ma'am!
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - Lumenari - 07-04-2020
(07-03-2020, 11:25 PM)beez Wrote:(07-03-2020, 10:47 PM)727Sky Wrote: Short and to the point.. Well done
Thank you! My shoulder is still gummed up so my typing is limited.
Because of the recoil or...
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - beez - 07-04-2020
(07-04-2020, 02:13 AM)Lumenari Wrote:. . . Slapping Gunther for coughing without a mask in my presence.(07-03-2020, 11:25 PM)beez Wrote:(07-03-2020, 10:47 PM)727Sky Wrote: Short and to the point.. Well done
Thank you! My shoulder is still gummed up so my typing is limited.
Because of the recoil or...
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - IAMTAT - 07-04-2020
That was more moving than a Metamucil Smoothie!
BRAVO!
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - Kevin666 - 07-04-2020
(07-04-2020, 02:07 AM)beez Wrote:(07-04-2020, 02:03 AM)ChiefD Wrote: Great story! Unexpected twist there at the end.
Thank you ma'am!
Did someone say my name 3 times?
I got a message that someone said my name 3 times.
So now I am here to make your life better.
Do bunnies stink?
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - beez - 07-04-2020
(07-04-2020, 04:18 AM)Kevin666 Wrote:(07-04-2020, 02:07 AM)beez Wrote:(07-04-2020, 02:03 AM)ChiefD Wrote: Great story! Unexpected twist there at the end.
Thank you ma'am!
Did someone say my name 3 times?
I got a message that someone said my name 3 times.
So now I am here to make your life better.
Do bunnies stink?
Oh. Ummm, hi.
Kevin.
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - Sol - 07-07-2020
Nice twist. Me likes!!
RE: The Shooter [FBF 2020] - beez - 07-07-2020
(07-07-2020, 12:53 AM)Sol Wrote: Nice twist. Me likes!!
Thanks boss!