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A Stroll In The Sun [FBF2020] - Lumenari - 06-22-2020
Here we go, I find myself walking down the street,
Thinking I might find myself something good to eat.
I ran across a friend of mine I was surprised to meet
But can’t talk long, it’s 12 o’clock, I’ve got a crowd to beat!
I’m on a healthy diet now, no sugar and no meat
But today I felt I’ve been so good that I deserve a cheat!
I found my local cafe and went in to take a seat
Oh look a piece of apple pie! Yes, that would be a treat!
My tummy’s full, I need a nap, with all this Summer heat
A grand idea, heading home and thinking this is neat!
A vision! Peter Cottontail, some folks call him Pete
Chilling on my front lawn cooling off his fuzzy feet.
So I put a bullet in his head
'Cause I want rabbit meat.
The End
Thought I would put a cheerful entry into the contest first so my new neighborhood doesn't think that I am... slightly off.
RE: A Stroll In The Sun [FBF2020] - guohua - 06-22-2020
@"Lumenari"
Quote:So I put a bullet in his head
'Cause I want rabbit meat.
I Just love That part, don't forget the Carrots and White Potatoes with Baby Pees what A Great Stew.
RE: A Stroll In The Sun [FBF2020] - Bally002 - 06-22-2020
(06-22-2020, 07:06 AM)guohua Wrote: @"Lumenari"
Quote:So I put a bullet in his head
'Cause I want rabbit meat.
I Just love That part, don't forget the Carrots and White Potatoes with Baby Pees what A Great Stew.
Hey Beez! Mate, you really need to read this!
RE: A Stroll In The Sun [FBF2020] - 727Sky - 06-22-2020
The competition has been ramped up a few notches !! WTG !
RE: A Stroll In The Sun [FBF2020] - Sol - 07-07-2020
Very, very nice. Cold, bold ending. Love it!
RE: A Stroll In The Sun [FBF2020] - Lumenari - 07-07-2020
(07-07-2020, 12:43 AM)Sol Wrote: Very, very nice. Cold, bold ending. Love it!
It was as light-hearted as I am capable of...
Based off of my first trip into town for a few months.
Thank you for the compliment!
