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The Shooter [FBF 2020]
#1
Kevin slowed his breathing down, willed his pulse rate to slow as he looked through the gun site at his target 950 meters away.  The rally was taking place in a park that was filled with people from all over the country.  The candidate was due to speak for a  few minutes, shake some hands, then go off to the next rally, three states away.

Kevin calmly waited.

When the target arrived on stage, Kevin slowly pulled the trigger and executed a perfect shot.  While people were still screaming and security running all over, Kevin smoothly dismantled the rifle and put on his robe, put on the slippers that looked like fluffy bunnies and walked back downstairs from the attic.

He quietly reentered the ward and shuffled to the window, looking at the parade of police and emergency vehicles as they raced to the park that was over a half mile away.

Two nurses, looking over charts glanced at Kevin.  One said, "What's his story?"

The other replied, "Oh, that's Kevin.  He came in here a week ago catatonic, doesn't speak, just looks out the window every day.  He's kind of sweet, just quiet."
"I be ridin' they be hatin'."
-Abraham Lincoln
#2
@"beez"    minusculeclap minusculebeercheers
Once A Rogue, Always A Rogue!
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#3
(07-03-2020, 08:41 PM)guohua Wrote: @"beez"    minusculeclap minusculebeercheers

Thank you ma'am!

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"I be ridin' they be hatin'."
-Abraham Lincoln
#4
Short and to the point.. Well done  minusculebeercheers
#5
Good job!
#6
(07-03-2020, 10:47 PM)727Sky Wrote: Short and to the point.. Well done  minusculebeercheers

Thank you!  My shoulder is still gummed up so my typing is limited. tinybiggrin
"I be ridin' they be hatin'."
-Abraham Lincoln
#7
(07-03-2020, 10:53 PM)Captain Chaos Wrote: Good job!

Thank you!    tinybiggrin
"I be ridin' they be hatin'."
-Abraham Lincoln
#8
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Great story! Unexpected twist there at the end.
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#9
(07-04-2020, 02:03 AM)ChiefD Wrote: Great story! Unexpected twist there at the end.

Thank you ma'am!

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"I be ridin' they be hatin'."
-Abraham Lincoln
#10
(07-03-2020, 11:25 PM)beez Wrote:
(07-03-2020, 10:47 PM)727Sky Wrote: Short and to the point.. Well done  minusculebeercheers

Thank you!  My shoulder is still gummed up so my typing is limited. tinybiggrin

Because of the recoil or...

tinyangry
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#11
(07-04-2020, 02:13 AM)Lumenari Wrote:
(07-03-2020, 11:25 PM)beez Wrote:
(07-03-2020, 10:47 PM)727Sky Wrote: Short and to the point.. Well done  minusculebeercheers

Thank you!  My shoulder is still gummed up so my typing is limited. tinybiggrin

Because of the recoil or...

tinyangry
. . . Slapping Gunther for coughing without a mask in my presence.
"I be ridin' they be hatin'."
-Abraham Lincoln
#12
That was more moving than a Metamucil Smoothie!

BRAVO!

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#13
(07-04-2020, 02:07 AM)beez Wrote:
(07-04-2020, 02:03 AM)ChiefD Wrote: Great story! Unexpected twist there at the end.

Thank you ma'am!

tinybiggrin

Did someone say my name 3 times?

I got a message that someone said my name 3 times.

So now I am here to make your life better.

Do bunnies stink?

tinysure
#14
(07-04-2020, 04:18 AM)Kevin666 Wrote:
(07-04-2020, 02:07 AM)beez Wrote:
(07-04-2020, 02:03 AM)ChiefD Wrote: Great story! Unexpected twist there at the end.

Thank you ma'am!

tinybiggrin

Did someone say my name 3 times?

I got a message that someone said my name 3 times.

So now I am here to make your life better.

Do bunnies stink?

tinysure

Oh.  Ummm, hi.

Kevin.

tinywhat
"I be ridin' they be hatin'."
-Abraham Lincoln
#15
Nice twist. Me likes!!
~ Today is the youngest you'll ever be again ~
#16
(07-07-2020, 12:53 AM)Sol Wrote: Nice twist. Me likes!!

Thanks boss!
"I be ridin' they be hatin'."
-Abraham Lincoln


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