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The Origin of "Splook".
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(07-08-2020, 11:49 PM)guohua Wrote:
(07-08-2020, 11:42 PM)Bally002 Wrote:
(07-08-2020, 11:38 PM)guohua Wrote: Is this to be Continued?  minusculeclap

Yes, I did write a second lengthy part but the ending is a bit corny.  Perhaps the story line was somewhat boring and not easy to understand.  Need to edit it.  Thank you for your compliment.

OK, that explains it, I thought it was my Chinese Brain way of thinking.

A part II would be interesting, I like the Plot.

No worries.  I need to update the part II to enable a better story line and conclusion.  Thank you for your kind comment.

My regards,

Bally:)


Messages In This Thread
The Origin of "Splook". - by Bally002 - 07-08-2020, 08:02 PM
RE: The Origin of "Splook". - by guohua - 07-08-2020, 11:38 PM
RE: The Origin of "Splook". - by Bally002 - 07-08-2020, 11:42 PM
RE: The Origin of "Splook". - by guohua - 07-08-2020, 11:49 PM
RE: The Origin of "Splook". - by Bally002 - 07-09-2020, 08:30 AM
RE: The Origin of "Splook". - by F2d5thCav - 07-09-2020, 08:20 AM
RE: The Origin of "Splook". - by Bally002 - 07-09-2020, 08:28 AM

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