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Welcome to the Real World: Knockoff Iron Man
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"Gar man," taking off his mask.. "That armored car was easy as h#ll.. This is hundreds of thousands of dollars.. We did it bro.."


"Did you have to kill the guard Wisp," A hispanic kid takes off his mask? "I said not to ice him.. The it will bring the Heroes out.."

A man lands on the hood of van crushing it, "His name was Jack Smith.. He had a wife with two kids.."

"Gar,"The thugs have thier weapons drawn, "If it aint the white bread Commander.." Wisp open fires with his energy weapon knocking the Commander off the hood, "We have families too.. I am sick of you white boys trying to re enslave the black man.."

A five point star stabs into Wisp hand, "Race has nothing to do with this.." The Commander has rolled back up, "You killed a man who was just doing his job.. Trying to feed his family.."

Gar yells, "Wisp I told you this would bring them down on us.."

Gar's energy discharge hits a shield causing the energy to disapate..

The fight proceeds slowly as one by one the four thieves fall..

Wisp tries to crawl away only for the commander to pick him up, "Why.. Why did you kill the man? You had the money.."

"He was white and deserved.." Wisp is dropped by the Commander as a sharp metal piont comes out the front of the Commander's chest..

The Commander looks down as the metal twist out of his chest..

"I.. I did it," A man in weird  looking gear responds.. He laughs as an electronic voice speaks, "I F#$%ing did it!"

Wisp gets up and kicks the down dying Commander.. "Thank you brother.. "

The man looks at Wisp and shakes his head, causing Wisp to stop..

The same twisted blade goes through Wisp chest, "Why.. We.. We.."

"Oh this is a mugging.. I Go by K.I.M.," The Electronic voice coldly speaks.. "I watched you steal the money Wisp is it.. "

"What," Gar is waking up as he watches Wisp fall to the ground after the blade withdraws..

"Second I am white.. Third.. You killed a man doing his Job.." K.I.M. responds as the Commander tries to move, "Oh Commander.."

"Listen.. They are just," A sword falls and beheads the Commander..

Woozy Gar tries to get, "F#$% me.. D@#$.."

The bloodied twisted blade pierces Gar's head.. His eye somehow dislodge and was pinned to the ground..

One of the other  thieves tries to get up.. K.I.M. Thows the other two sided sword accurately pinning the man to the van..

K.I.M withdraws the triblade from Gar.. Walking over to the other Thief, he repeats the process..

The last one is still out cold.. He takes the mask off the person and pauses.. "Well welcome to a F#$%ing diverse world.. An Asian female.." K.I.M. shakes his head after he scans her, "Pregnant.. She cant be more then 15.."

Reaching into a belt he takes out a rag and puts it over her mouth..

"Breath it in honey.." K.I.M. follows it up by placing a device on her forehead, "You had to be F#$%ing Pregnant.." Frisking her he finds a pouch and takes it out, " Jennifer Patel.. With an Address.. fifteen."

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"So you finally decided to join the world of the living," An older Asian man spoke with disdain..

"Honey.. " A white woman put her hand on her husband's shoulder, "Jennifer Darling.." The woman pulls out the chair, "HAVE A SEAT!"

Looking down at her clothes, "Step mother I.. I can explain.. Dad."

"Why you are so drunk you cant get into the house.. Or why you have a pregnancy test with positive," Mr. Patel glares.. "I did not work my fingers to the bone for you to get knocked up and.."

A knock came from the door.. Mr. Patel went to the door.. Seeing it, "Mr. Gutez.. now is a bad time.."

"My son is dead..He was found headless.. He was last seen with your daughter and Carter's boy.." The Angry hispanic man yelled, "The police are on their way.. They say my boy robbed an armored car and killed the commander.."

Jennifer goes running past the door to the bathroom.. The sound of her puking reaches the door..

"Mr. Gutez.. When we got home last night my daughter had been drinking.." Mr. Patel was loud as an unmarked police car pulled up.. As the Officer's got out, "She broke into our Alcohol chest and got drunk.." The cops hear this as they walk up and are greeted by the sound of puking, "As you hear.. She is paying the price.."

"Mr. Gutez," One of the officers spoke.. "We told you not to be here.."

"That little B#$%^ knows what happened to my boy.. He is not a killer," Mr. Gutez was upset..

As her father and the law argued, Jennifer had tears fall down her face.. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a piece of paper, "What the F#$% is.."

"The stars were in your favor last night.." The note has something else on the back, "You live only because you are now a mother.. I advise you to deny.. Deny.. Deny.."

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"Protestors are outside Justice hall demanding answers from the Militia.." The reporter spoke, "Tape footage was found from one of the Dead teens with the Commander using the N-word.."

"Those kids were criminals," Another newscaster spoke.. "They helped some unknown villian kill the Commander.. I for one do not buy this.. It's the commander.. Next thing your gonna say is the commander has secretly been a nazi all this time earning our trust.. "

"I am not saying that.. But the footage is pretty clear and can be heard as one Garth Gutez shot the commander.. Some are claiming in self defense.."

"Self defense.. They killed a guard.. Police had a lead, but an inside source said the woman was home at the time.." The man shook his head, "The militia is investigating.."

Half of Everyone listening in the bar had a black armband on mourning Commander.. Arguments where raising up with those that did not have arm bands on..

The bouncers had to remove several people..

A male sat watching the TV screen ignoring them..

A waitress walked over sitting a drink down, "Here you go honey.." She sat down as she watched the news with him, "It is sad.. He was a hero so many looked up to.. To be a racist all these years.."

"Raquel," The man sipped his drink.. "Looks like Johnny is very busy tonight.."

Raquel shook her head, "Mr. Moriarty.." Raquel laughed not meaning to at the name, "I am sorry.. Your parents must have been A$$es.. Named you Arthur H. Moriarty.."

On the tv screen "We will find out what happened.." A woman wearing a mask spoke forcibly, "I have known the Commander for years.. This is not his behavior.."

"The Raptor," Moriarty looked at the screen.. "Worlds greatest investigator.."

"Thats right.." One of the drunk men with the Commander's arm band's on yelled, "He aint racist.. And what does the N-word matter.. You people use it all the time with each other.."

"Mother F#$%er," One of the equally Drunk black men yelled.. "He killed teenagers.. He was caught on tape.."

Johnny tries to get between the two men but is knocked out cold..

"Why dont you try calling me that name and see what happens," The black man and his friends are all standing..

"My god," Raquel calls out as the african american males draw blades.. "Johnny they will kill him!"

Quietly Arthur walks over, "Excuse me good sir.."

"Look another nazi is trying," The speaker freezes as he is staring down a side arm..

"Kill them.. We got your," The white boy freezes when a second gun is in his face..

"Johnny.. You all right," Arthur Moriarty calls out..

The hispanic Bouncer gets up, "Thank you.."

"Now.. I am gonna say my piece.. I cant believe just who F#$%ing stupid you two are.. Malcom X himself warned you of days like this.." Arthur spoke to the four froozen men, "You are divided and look how easy it was.."

"We are not stupid," Both men with guns in their faces responded..

"Really.. Dude we both know that no god D@#$ kid could have killed the commander.. A war veteran from WWII and then Korea and Vietnam.." Arthur shook his head, "Have either of you considered that this whole D@#$ thing is a set up.. A supervillian probably offed him.. Forged the recording on the cell phone.. Killing all of them.."

The Balck man frooze, "Please.. It.. A villain would have been taping his victory and posting it every where.."

"Yeah.." The white man yelled, "Those kids .. It was a robbery.. They killed that man.."

Shaking his head walking away, Arthur put his guns up.. "Have at it you inbred idiots.."

"You aint so big with out those guns out," The black man spoke.. "We.."

"Please.. Look at what this supervillian accomplished.. Not a single one of you have considered.. Where the F#$% is the money.." Arthur's comment made the friends standing strat looking at each other, "You were right Mr. Commander Supporter.. It was a robbery.. The crap you heard was probably designed to cover it up.. Four people died and you idiots are arguing over a word.."

"I am not a F#$%ing idiot," The African American male calls out but his friends are ignoring him..

"Dude he has a point.. Where is the money?" Taking a deep breath, "If this was a set up.."

One of the Commander Supporters spoke, "He would not be shouting it from the roof tops.."

The two people look at each other, "Raptor.. "

The pissed off caucasian American spoke," We can take them.."

"Naw.. Man's right.. Who ever did this killed the Commander and .. And those kids in cold blood.." The man's drinking buddy put away his weapon, "The raptor.."

The other Black guy put up his weapon, "Will be hunting for this person.. The money Bro.. Where is it?"

Arthur walks back to his table and downs his drink, "It is how I would do it.." Opening his wallet he takes out four hundred dollars.. "Raquel.. A round of drinks on me.."

Taking his arm, "Listen Arthur.. Uhm my boyfriend cant pick me up tonight.. Can I bum a ride from you?"

"Sure," Arthur Moriarty looked at the Television screen..

"Raptor is deadly serious," The Camera caught the man with jelly fish tentacles coming from his back as he floated in the air.. "Blue.."

A blue haired Female swallowed hard, "She is .. Raptor.. Raptor.."

"Blue stay out of my way.." Raptor turned around with tears in her eyes, "Out there is the monster that killed my husband.. I know your listening.. I will not stop till I find you.. Do you understand? I will hunt you down like a dog.."

Arthur Moriarty sat back down, "Raquel.. I need a refill.. Make it Scotch and Jack.. On ice.."

The people at the bar found out the next round was on the man who ended the fight... "Cheers," Everyone called out as Arthur nodded to him..

Johnny walked over after the two problem children were quietly escorted out.. "Arthur.. If the cops come buy.. Those guns.. Go out the back.." Seeing Arthur looking at the screen, "I would not want to be in that man's shoes.."

Looking at his feet, "Niether would I.. What is Raquel deal?"

Raquel brings Arthur back his drink with change, "Mr. Moriarty.."

"Keep the changed but keep me refilled," Looking at her.. "You might be driving tonight.."

"Thats cool," the waitress walked away..

"Be careful.. Her boyfriend is mean and Jealous," Johnny spoke coldly..

"You dont say," An idea crossed Moriarty's eyes.. "You do not say.."


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Welcome to the Real World: Knockoff Iron Man - by Armonica_Templar - 09-22-2017, 01:35 AM

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