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Not exactly poetry, but 2 recent song lyrics
#1
1. CONFIDENT EVENING

Been drinking a lot of coffee today
Been smoking a lot of cigarettes
Been doing a lot of thinking today
To clear up this mess

Leaving them all behind now
Leaving them without my feelings
Leaving them all with themselves now
To prepare the soil for new seedlings

They are leaving, i will stay
Because i made up my mind today
Made up my mind today, hey!
If they stay, then i will be leaving
Morning uncertainty turns into confident evening
Confident evening, hey!

Wondering if you are still there
Wondering where am i?
Wondering if i am still there
Where i left myself behind

Expecting to receive everything
Expecting to be left with nothing at all
Expecting to give you everything
Where i firmly stand to break your fall

They are leaving, i will stay
Because i made up my mind today
Made up my mind today, hey!
If they stay, then i will be leaving
Morning uncertainty turns into confident evening
Confident evening, hey!
Confident evening, hey, hey, yeah!


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2. REMAIN THE SAME 

I don't want to think about the past
It has gone away, it didn't last
Future only makes me uncertain
As it's empty promises reveal behind the curtain
The present time is too near
Because i am real only here

I don't want to change myself in vain
Everything changes, and change brings pain
I don't want to remain the same
Because then i lose when everything is a game
I don't want to remain the same
I don't want to remain the same

My heart tells me about love
The days, the nights and the skies above
My mind tells me about madness
Leaves me wondering why i find comfort in sadness
My soul tells me about Goddesses and Gods
I tell them i am too faulty and get replied with nods

I don't want to change myself in vain
Everything changes, and change brings pain
I don't want to remain the same
Because then i lose when everything is a game
I don't want to remain the same
I don't want to remain the same
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#2
(09-30-2020, 06:05 PM)Finspiracy Wrote: 1. CONFIDENT EVENING

Been drinking a lot of coffee today
Been smoking a lot of cigarettes
Been doing a lot of thinking today
To clear up this mess

Leaving them all behind now
Leaving them without my feelings
Leaving them all with themselves now
To prepare the soil for new seedlings

They are leaving, i will stay
Because i made up my mind today
Made up my mind today, hey!
If they stay, then i will be leaving
Morning uncertainty turns into confident evening
Confident evening, hey!

Wondering if you are still there
Wondering where am i?
Wondering if i am still there
Where i left myself behind

Expecting to receive everything
Expecting to be left with nothing at all
Expecting to give you everything
Where i firmly stand to break your fall

They are leaving, i will stay
Because i made up my mind today
Made up my mind today, hey!
If they stay, then i will be leaving
Morning uncertainty turns into confident evening
Confident evening, hey!
Confident evening, hey, hey, yeah!


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2. REMAIN THE SAME 

I don't want to think about the past
It has gone away, it didn't last
Future only makes me uncertain
As it's empty promises reveal behind the curtain
The present time is too near
Because i am real only here

I don't want to change myself in vain
Everything changes, and change brings pain
I don't want to remain the same
Because then i lose when everything is a game
I don't want to remain the same
I don't want to remain the same

My heart tells me about love
The days, the nights and the skies above
My mind tells me about madness
Leaves me wondering why i find comfort in sadness
My soul tells me about Goddesses and Gods
I tell them i am too faulty and get replied with nods

I don't want to change myself in vain
Everything changes, and change brings pain
I don't want to remain the same
Because then i lose when everything is a game
I don't want to remain the same
I don't want to remain the same
For you Finn


WAR IS PEACE, FREEDOM IS SLAVERY, IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH, THE EU IS FATHER AND MOTHER / FEAR NOT DEATH, BUT FEAR THE WAY YOU WILL DIE
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#3
You'll have to make a video when you put it to music and share it with us.   minusculethumbsup
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#4
@Wallfire  Thank you for the song link, i loved it! I need to listen to it a couple of more times to get really into it. Always the same thing with me and interesting songs, i need multiple times of listening through.

@Mystic Wanderer  That would be awesome! However, i am not musical at all tinyangry But i would like to be. There was a time when i really tried to learn to sing, but no... It sounds like a crow is in a serious distress somewhere. And i can't play any instruments, maybe that would be possible to learn but i don't have enough patience and attention span. Heck, i can't even dance at all. So i write.
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#5
Okay since this forum is for poetry, i tried to write something else than songs.


I AM


I am the cause
I am the effect
The loving care and the neglect
I am the moth
I am the flame
The guilty one, and not the one to blame

I am the servant
I am the majesty
The true representation and the travesty
I am the sword
I am the shield
The autumn harvester and the field

I am.
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#6
Reading them I am drawn..
Put to music they would well be compelling in terms of songs. They are of a different path than the usual. The artist I picture putting these to music would be none other than...
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There is some complexity to your lyrics. For instance ...

2. REMAIN THE SAME 


I don't want to think about the past
It has gone away, it didn't last
Future only makes me uncertain
As it's empty promises reveal behind the curtain
The present time is too near
Because i am real only here

I don't want to change myself in vain
Everything changes, and change brings pain
I don't want to remain the same
Because then i lose when everything is a game
I don't want to remain the same
I don't want to remain the same

My heart tells me about love
The days, the nights and the skies above
My mind tells me about madness
Leaves me wondering why i find comfort in sadness
My soul tells me about Goddesses and Gods
I tell them i am too faulty and get replied with nods

I don't want to change myself in vain
Everything changes, and change brings pain
I don't want to remain the same
Because then i lose when everything is a game
I don't want to remain the same
I don't want to remain the same
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#7
JUST AS BAD

They used to tell me that i always need a reason
But i never needed one
Now that i have a reason
I still don't need it to be done

They say that a gambler never counts his money
But i never had any
Now that i have cans of poison, honey
What matters anymore is: how many?

I want to fight all the fighters
Kill all the killers
Murder all the murderers
So i am left alone, just as bad as they were
Just as bad as they were
But my mind is too kind and i can't kill the fact that i care
Just as bad as they were
Just as bad as they were

They treat me depending on my diagnose
But i never needed one
Now that i have all diagnoses
I still want to be met as someone

They say that darkness is deepest just before the dawn, dear
But i never wanted a sunrise
Now that darkness has lasted through this year
Is it enough for the evil ones suffice?

I want to fight all the fighters
Kill all the killers
Murder all the murderers
So i am left alone, just as bad as they were
Just as bad as they were
But my mind is too kind and i can't kill the fact that i care
Just as bad as they were
Just as bad as they were

As bad as they were, yeah!
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#8
(10-12-2020, 01:32 PM)Finspiracy Wrote: JUST AS BAD

They used to tell me that i always need a reason
But i never needed one
Now that i have a reason
I still don't need it to be done

They say that a gambler never counts his money
But i never had any
Now that i have cans of poison, honey
What matters anymore is: how many?

I want to fight all the fighters
Kill all the killers
Murder all the murderers
So i am left alone, just as bad as they were
Just as bad as they were
But my mind is too kind and i can't kill the fact that i care
Just as bad as they were
Just as bad as they were

They treat me depending on my diagnose
But i never needed one
Now that i have all diagnoses
I still want to be met as someone

They say that darkness is deepest just before the dawn, dear
But i never wanted a sunrise
Now that darkness has lasted through this year
Is it enough for the evil ones suffice?

I want to fight all the fighters
Kill all the killers
Murder all the murderers
So i am left alone, just as bad as they were
Just as bad as they were
But my mind is too kind and i can't kill the fact that i care
Just as bad as they were
Just as bad as they were

As bad as they were, yeah!
I understand how hard it is express ones self in a foreign language, so you are doing well
WAR IS PEACE, FREEDOM IS SLAVERY, IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH, THE EU IS FATHER AND MOTHER / FEAR NOT DEATH, BUT FEAR THE WAY YOU WILL DIE
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